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Discussion in 'Cementerio De Temas' started by nct9, Jan 6, 2011.

  1. tikka

    tikka Usuario Habitual nvl.3 ★
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    gracias por aportar ;)
     
  2. RaS.QocKe

    RaS.QocKe Usuario Casual nvl. 2
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    oohh.. ta buena la historiaa...
     
  3. Hiei!

    Hiei! Usuario Casual nvl. 2
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    me gusto la historia
     
  4. AlvaRock666

    AlvaRock666 Usuario Nuevo nvl. 1
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    Buena Historia!
    Se agradece
     
  5. .:MaXy:.

    .:MaXy:. Usuario Habitual nvl.3 ★
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  6. george3045

    george3045 Usuario Casual nvl. 2
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    Buen relato men
     
  7. killerreed

    killerreed Usuario Casual nvl. 2
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    Buena historia, sin embargo no me agrada el final, es muy predecible...

    Igual creo desde mi muy humilde y aficionado punto de vista que tienes talento para la narración.

    Saludos.
     
  8. D1SA5T3R

    D1SA5T3R Usuario Casual nvl. 2
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    intedezanteeeee
     
  9. ~ pameeboo

    ~ pameeboo Usuario Casual nvl. 2
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    :O buena historia....
     
  10. ZebaaxD

    ZebaaxD Usuario Casual nvl. 2
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    ohhhh buena la historia pero ojala no le pase a nadie wn D:
     
  11. nct9

    nct9 Usuario Nuevo nvl. 1
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    yo no la escribí solo que la lei y me gustó y quice mostrarsela a todos los portalianos
     
  12. Puntoocom-

    Puntoocom- Usuario Casual nvl. 2
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    muy largatu wea