Mi Obra Maestra

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  1. Mr.MattaPsk2

    Mr.MattaPsk2 Invitado
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    Muy Buena Socio, Se Agradece este tipo de aportes :)
     
    #25 Mr.MattaPsk2, Feb 7, 2011
  2. KANO WINS

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    Muy bueno, exelente ortografia y gramatica, en proza parese hip-hop.
    Dale.....
     
    #26 KANO WINS, Feb 7, 2011
  3. sIMP.

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    no deberia ir en literatura?
     
    #27 sIMP., Feb 7, 2011
  4. RomantiKK

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    buen aporte, aunqe tu descripcion la encontre fria, carente de sentimientos, como si a alguien le hubiera pasado, y tu describiendola hasta el minimo de detalles pero friamente, me gusto y no me gusto jaja
     
    #28 RomantiKK, Feb 7, 2011
  5. xFucking.Mindx

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    ta wena wn;D
     
    #29 xFucking.Mindx, Feb 7, 2011
  6. pablo1203

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    :O esta weno wn lei entera la wea me gusto se agradece :D
     
    #30 pablo1203, Feb 7, 2011
  7. Fabhusi

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    Excelente wn
     
    #31 Fabhusi, Feb 7, 2011
  8. werek!

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    de primera no entendi nada..hasta ke lei el final...
    ke buena narrativa me parecio genial..dale mas terror a los personajes si sigues escribiendo cosas asi..
     
    #32 werek!, Feb 7, 2011
  9. Gustav_Korwin

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    me gustó ctm..
    se agradece.. ^^
     
    #33 Gustav_Korwin, Feb 7, 2011
  10. Hiei!

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    leyendo el final lo entendi........buen aporte :)
     
    #34 Hiei!, Feb 7, 2011
  11. kusagamy

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    Estimados portalianos, creo que esta historia es buena.....pero..esto es ""DIMENSIÓN DESCONOCIDA"""

    Debería ir en foro de "LITERATURA"....

    Pongámonos serios por favor....
     
    #35 kusagamy, Feb 7, 2011
  12. Daur Daurik

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    Buena historia, me recordó un poema que leí aquí en portalnet.
    Se agradece.
     
    #36 Daur Daurik, Feb 7, 2011
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