[Poema] A desire in the shadow

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  1. ryucore

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    I can't,
    And sometimes i think i'm trying
    so deep inside.

    I can't even sit down anywhere i would,
    I don't have enough peace to do that.

    I would like to watch you to your eyes,
    But i can't,
    There are a lot of things rounding in my head.

    You are so beautiful
    That i'm afraid i can't even see you,
    Because i would have to smile at you,
    I would have to talk to you with my eyes

    And then you will know,
    That you are so beautiful to me.
     
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    Entendí un poco... pero se agradecería que lo tradujeras al español, el inglés no es mi fuerte :(
     
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    Bien profundo comparito, the deepest desires, the biggest pleasures are held in the shadows. Let's get more confident to bring'em to light!

    Para el amigo que pidió la traducción, aquí la mía... ojalá no faltarle el respeto al autor, esto es sin ánimo de ofender y con todas las de apañar, jeje.

     
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    Wow , hermoso enamoras :x
     
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    Excelente poema, muy bueno.
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    Soy socio en restaurantes del Grupo Pampas / Espero que subas más poemas.